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Thursday, 30 July 2015

Introducing Melvyne



Today is open day and my friend Melvyne has shown me some new apps her favorite color is blue she is 10 years old and has a very cool personality  her favorite thing to do is art and music
she would love to be in a digital class room
and her parents are thinking of her to come to Wesley intermediate school
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous6 August 2015 at 10:11

    I really like how you introduce a girl from another school about herself. Nice work.

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  2. Anonymous7 August 2015 at 11:16

    Hey Grace, Like how you described your friend but you could really introduce her a little more and maybe change the lighting of the picture so it can show her face, but overall it was good.

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  3. Anonymous13 August 2015 at 10:15

    Wow,what awesome work grace.I see you've built an relationship with a girl you don't know.What good social skills you have.If you want to you can check out my blog.

    http://wisjosephh.blogspot.co.nz/

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  4. Anonymous20 August 2015 at 11:15

    I like how you put a picture on your blog of Melvyne from the open day.
    Also I like how you explained what happened on open day.
    Also I like how you explained how old she was.Next time you should edit the spelling.

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